Tuesday, September 16, 2014

Dog and Snow (Paul S. Piper)

A quick one tonight, as I'm composing this on an iPad. Dog and Snow by Paul S. Piper.

It's an easy read and sweet. It annoys me with its proper noun/names for the players of the piece: Dog and Master. Just bugs, is all.

I don't really care for this poem. It has no emotional connection for me. No fun language or excellent description. It's boring. I don't even get a sense of what the dog looks like.  Though, I suppose, that's purposeful what with the given generic name/title "Dog".

I think it's dull, but what do you think? (Vote below!)

Favorite line: "Dog sees white. Arctic / light"

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