It's short and confusing with its talk of Greek islands and olives and marl, but as you read you begin to feel a little flushed and you realize that the island, olives and marl stand for a lover's body and their sex.
I like how he describes her body and their intimacy. Having so many metaphors like that is kind of cool.
Favorite line: "Traveling over your body I found / The falling olive and the cajoling flute"
Traveling over your body I found
The failing olive and the cajoling flute, - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/23510#sthash.Ek2dONL2.dpufTra
The failing olive and the cajoling flute, - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/23510#sthash.Ek2dONL2.dpufTra
Traveling over your body I found
The failing olive and the cajoling flute, - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/23510#sthash.Ek2dONL2.dpufT
The failing olive and the cajoling flute, - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/23510#sthash.Ek2dONL2.dpufT
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