It's a metephor, I suppose. Or a math equation. Marriage = man + woman = stream + field.
Both man and woman are unique individuals as a stream and field are unique entities, but both are needed to complete the scene, to make a marriage.
This poem seems fine, but also seems lazy. I don't feel deeply as I read. I am not inspired by unique descriptors. Dunno, seems kind of dull to me.
Favorite line: "so different, this man"
So different, this man
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