There is nothing special about the language (which might make you think 'poem' even when it's done in paragraphs). There is also nothing special about the philosophy. It takes a subject which we all know about and doesn't add much to the telling. Seems a lot like the game, actually.
I really don't understand why this poem was published. How it was picked above another. It seems boring and unskilled. For me, it just does not work.
Favorite line: "When I stop and think about what it's all about I do come up with some answers, but they don't help very much."
WWhen I
stop and think about what it's all about I do come up with some answers,
but they don’t help very much. - See more at:
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/23399#sthash.IRdWZUXP.dpuf
When I
stop and think about what it's all about I do come up with some answers,
but they don’t help very much. - See more at:
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/23399#sthash.IRdWZUXP.dpuf
When I
stop and think about what it's all about I do come up with some answers,
but they don’t help very much. - See more at:
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/23399#sthash.IRdWZUXP.dpuf
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