This is a wonderful, story-book of a poem. The language is pretty prose-y and can't you just see this as an outline for a longer, dramatic story?
Great language, neat, but natural rhyme. She's very talented.
Favorite line: "Hold me on your heart as the brave sea holds the foam"
Hold me on
your heart as the brave sea holds the foam, - See more at:
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/23577#sthash.RLzDIzHp.dpuf
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